my new poem

Due to the Englsih Independent Self-study Unit(ENG4C ISU), I should create a unique poem.
Fortunaetly, i've done it. Let's take a look on it.

" You Should Know About This"

There is no one can defeat us over,
we're the united crew forever.
We're like one engine that cannot be put apart,
it's important to have everyone no matter in which part.

One night, i heard the sound of the owl outisde the window,
it's standing on the branch and crying like the widow.
It blaim the people what they have done for the forest,
Friends; wake up, you would get arrest.

We never talk'bout the guns and the drugs,
utill we saw the real guns and the drugs.
Well, we all know what the situation now.
Friends, trust me; guns and drugs could always take you down.

English, Spanish, or Irish?
Don't worry, it just different in language.
American, Latino, or Chinese?
Friends, we still are same family without racist.

Life is a kind of taste,
we can feel sweet, sour, spicy, and bitter.
We may become successful or loser in our life.
Don't matter, we just go and try it.

Bang, bang, bang from the kitchen.
Don't worry, it's just the sound of children playing in the kitchen.
Boom,boom,boom over the country.
That's what we really should care about.


____The End______



any comment?